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Thursday, 26 September 2019

My Writing

Once upon a time ago there lived a genie in a 
bottle that could read your mind but really she
 coundent she was a liar and she was hungry for
 money so she just said she could she traveled 
from town to town lying and lying no one could 
stop her she was on fire everybody envied her 
she was a queen but then one day someone caught her
She was on the run she didint want to go to jail 
then one day a man went up to her and said if you
 read my mind i will hide you and let you esape 
from the cops so the lady said yes of corse then
 the man tricked her and she rotted in jail for 

the rest of her life

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