Hi brooklyn its Ellie from papakura central school I really like your slide and how you told as about all the floods but next time maybe dont put the flashing the end it hurts my eyes
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Hi brooklyn
ReplyDeleteits Ellie from papakura central school
I really like your slide and how you told as about all the floods but next time maybe dont put the flashing the end it hurts my eyes
Thanks bye brooklyn
THanks ellie and
Deleteyes i will work
work on the end
and make sure to not
put any flashing lights
kind regards brooklyn
nice work on that well done
ReplyDeleteThanks hoani
Deletebut next time can you
please give me somethings i could
work on?
kind regards Brooklyn
hi brooklyn its me shayla i like how you put all the information on you slide and how you put your name to show you work
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