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Thursday, 26 September 2019

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The Glow Show Company
Papakura central school
Ray small drive


Dear The Glow Show Company,

I have written this letter to thank you so much
and giving us a great discount your show was
amazing i enjoyed it very much my favorite part
was when the little star sunk down into the ocean
and she met the two fish that thought she was a
star fish and i liked it because the play was a musical
also when but maybe next time you could darken the
room a bit more because I could see the people walking
around with the puppets but the puppets did look really
cool because the glow was double sided and it made the
show even more fun to watch and also all the music was
nice and I liked it how the people sing and dance and so i
just wanted to say thank you very much for performing the show

Warm regards

Brooklyn

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