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Friday, 27 July 2018

Floods

5 comments:

  1. Hi brooklyn
    its Ellie from papakura central school
    I really like your slide and how you told as about all the floods but next time maybe dont put the flashing the end it hurts my eyes

    Thanks bye brooklyn

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    1. THanks ellie and
      yes i will work
      work on the end
      and make sure to not
      put any flashing lights
      kind regards brooklyn

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  2. nice work on that well done

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    1. Thanks hoani
      but next time can you
      please give me somethings i could
      work on?

      kind regards Brooklyn

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  3. hi brooklyn its me shayla i like how you put all the information on you slide and how you put your name to show you work

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