Hi, I like the way you put an acrostic poem in that says mother. Next time you could put from Brooklyn at the end of your writing to your mum. From Jessica
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Hi,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put an acrostic poem in that says mother.
Next time you could put from Brooklyn at the end of your writing to your mum.
From Jessica
Hi jessica
ReplyDeletei thought that acrostic poem was cool to and I will work on that next time
kind regards Brooklyn
Hi my name is Kayla from Glen Taylor School and I am 9 years old I like your slide about Mother's day that is really nice about your mum.
ReplyDeleteHi I love your work about mothers day, I hope you make a beautiful card for your mum.
ReplyDeleteHi kayla hi harry its brooklyn and im glad that you like my work and i did make a nice card for my mum and i hope you guys did to bye
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